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X-Gene page 1 WiP

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The WiP for the first page of my comic. Please i would love feed back on this! I have NEVER done a comic and i'm only just starting to play with the pages since i'm far enough now in my X-gene fan fic to start working on it.

I wanted one page to have a little exposition on the X-gene and mutants, sort of like the movies, since i feel like this is a good opening and one page for it does seem like over doing it to me. I might be wrong though, i NEED feedback on this PLEASE

I left the blue in so you can see where i plan to put my text boxes, again i don't know much about comic book lay out other then what i've gotten from reading them.

FEED BACK PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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That looks really awesome! :D